do you have a room in your house where you keep the lovely things
that are cherished but b r o k e n
by accident or on purpose
to signify your materialism
but with a sentimental value attached to them
beyond the 4th dimension?
(there might be incomplete pieces of board games from your childhood that hide the wear and tear you had to bear.
there might be shards of glass from your favourite vase that you threw at the wall in frustration but cried about later.
or there might be gifts in there from friends you used to know but don’t fit your life anymore, as they don’t match the decor.)
no?
i don’t either.
Alternative title: distraught and in denial
Very experimental putting an alternative title at the end. Clever!
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it summarised the whole thing basically ๐
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okay that twist in the end is just, ahhh wow!!!! i’m in love with your writing. and i actually love collecting little treasures so this was a cool read โจ
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Ok so for a moment I forgot what the twist was!๐ I’m so glad you liked it, thank you so much for reading, wardah๐๐ what little treasures have you collected, I’d love to know!
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Of course โค Just little things, like small notes from people I love, gifts from my little siblings that seem useless but are just really cute, things like that :))
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Awwwiee, love that๐
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beautiful!!
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Thank you!
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yep ๐
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Wow Aarushi, this is so spectacularly done!!! I absolutely love it, the formatting is really good and my favorite part is the 1st italics stanza! Just breathtakingly beautiful, keep it up friend!!! Hugs and love ๐ค๐ค
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Oh, hope you don’t mind I edited it slightly! Thank you so much, Ace! I always look forward to your comments ๐๐
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Awe of course!! I always look forward to connecting with you too!! Itโs even better, nice work!!! ๐ค๐ฅณ
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I’m glad๐๐๐งก
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Oh wow. Aarushi this is quite simply beautiful. I canโt even begin to explain how much I love this piece. The imagery and the formatting is just amazing! So well done. Much love and Iโm excited for more posts from you โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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That’s so nice of you to say, thank you so much, Cait๐งก๐งก lots of love to you too๐
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