like two lonely souls,
we held hands and tried to dance,
but it made our fingers bleed.

tugging at my heartstrings,
you took the music right out of me.

o n e by o n e
as each string broke,
it played A sour note
and both of us fell to our knees
from the sheer force.

<end show>


  1. a.s. says:

    Wow!!!!!!!!!!! The imagery is incredible. Sad but really really well-written Aarushi. Hugs πŸ₯ΊπŸ€—

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    1. Aarushi says:

      thank you!!! hugs and love to you tooπŸ₯€πŸ₯€πŸ₯€πŸ₯€πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  2. Ace says:

    WOW!!! This is so incredible!!! You never fail to deliver such beautiful and powerful pieces!!! Well done, you are such a beautiful writer!!! πŸ–€πŸ€—

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  3. Akshay Kumar says:

    AMAZINGGG…❀️,deep.. So much pain and beautiful …I just loved it …great work aarushi …🀩

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  4. caitpoetry says:

    WOWOWOWOWOW I am in awe yet again!!! So beautiful and heartfelt. The first stanza alone is just brilliant!! Much love ❀ ❀

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