like two lonely souls,
we held hands and tried to dance,
but it made our fingers bleed.
tugging at my heartstrings,
you took the music right out of me.
o n e by o n e
as each string broke,
it played A sour note
and both of us fell to our knees
from the sheer force.
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Wow!!!!!!!!!!! The imagery is incredible. Sad but really really well-written Aarushi. Hugs π₯Ίπ€
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thank you!!! hugs and love to you tooπ₯π₯π₯π₯π€π€π€π€π€
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WOW!!! This is so incredible!!! You never fail to deliver such beautiful and powerful pieces!!! Well done, you are such a beautiful writer!!! π€π€
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thank you, Aceπ
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AMAZINGGG…β€οΈ,deep.. So much pain and beautiful …I just loved it …great work aarushi …π€©
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ohh thank you so much ππ
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WOWOWOWOWOW I am in awe yet again!!! So beautiful and heartfelt. The first stanza alone is just brilliant!! Much love β€ β€
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oooiii, thank you caitπβ€οΈπ
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