vigilant

this finding myself
part should not be this hard as
I am just right here.

(it’s only a few lines on a page, but they took forever to get just right.) I’m also delighted about how it kind of looks like a mask, sleeping with one eye open?

have a wonderful weekend. see ya next week! (:

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    1. Aarushi says:

      you said more words about the piece than the piece itself, love that hehe ❀

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      1. Well, it’s a great piece. Could write a lot on just this to be honest.

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  1. Excellent! Short and sweet and to the point (which you made a magical experience). Brevity as its finest!

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    1. Aarushi says:

      thank you Benjamin ❣️ that’s so sweet of you✨

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      1. You’re welcome! From poem to poem, your work really stand out. I have to let you know this!

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        1. Aarushi says:

          thank you so much! i really love your work so that means a lot to me, thank you for thinking so and saying that ❀

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          1. You’re welcome. You truly have an incredible sense for how to write a poem!

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  2. caitpoetry says:

    This is so beautifully written and the use of italics is so well done!! Hope you are well ❀️❀️

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  3. Ace says:

    The few short lines are sublime, dear Aarushi! I really really love it, so perfectly written πŸ™ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ€—πŸ–€

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      1. Ace says:

        Awww of course! Always in your corner, my dear friend! Love you πŸ€—πŸ–€

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